The cave is dark and I am scared of the dark.He traveled from an island so he must of looked at the island when he was riding on the boat.
Monday, March 23, 2020
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Your pirate story is a good piece of writing Cylis. I wonder what is in the cave? Maybe you could add some more to the story to tell us?
ReplyDeleteHi Cylis. Great job, your writing is improving all the time. This is going to be an exciting story.I hope the pirate has a treasure map to find the treasure.
ReplyDeleteHi Cylis, I really liked your pirate story, I wonder which Island he travelled from?.
ReplyDeleteAmazing job cylis
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